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You are not alone

I see you struggling,
You have no motivation, you are fading,
You feel like you're surrounded by lies,
But I know otherwise,

I need you to think,
Let all your feelings out with ink,
I can really help you,
If you just give me the chance to,

I'm here for you and I shall always be,
You can trust me,
You can't keep on doing this to yourself,
I can't even bare the thought of being by myself,

You are beautiful, you are you,
And I love you,
So please, please don't feel bad,
You're only making me sad,

You are my friend,
And you will be until the very end,
Please feel better,
I'll be here forever.
Well, I wrote this piece in about 10 minutes.
This is for one of my friends who's having a really though time.
I hope she gets better.

Comments are welcome.
Enjoy!
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EvelynTaliette Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Student Writer
Nice job! A wonderful little manta to think of when you're feeling down, as we all do at one point or another.
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Chrisy21 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
Aww, thank you very much. That means a lot to me that you think it's wonderful. :D
I appreciate it. :D
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foto-ragazza14 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012
This is so beautiful... I wish the best of luck to your friend in overcoming her obstacles. Wonderful job. :clap:
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Chrisy21 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012
Aww, thank you so much. That means a lot to me, especially from you. :D
Thank you, she's actually doing better today, let all her emotions out.
Thank you and thank you for the fav. :D
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foto-ragazza14 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012
Awww no problem at all, m'dear! As always, it was well-earned. :)

I'm glad to hear it. And my pleasure.
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Applemac12 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
It's beautiful Chrisy! You've expressed yourself so well! It will mean so much to her! :aww:
Well done love! :huggle:
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Chrisy21 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012
Aww, thank you. The most beautiful works are the ones that come from the heart, am I right?
I hope she will like it. :D
Thank you Vin, and thanks again for the fav. :hug:
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Applemac12 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You are very right! :aww:
I'm sure she will Chrisy! :D
My pleasure love! :huggle:
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bluedragoneye Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's lovely Chris may she lean on you in her time of need :hug:
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Chrisy21 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012
aww, thank you. I actually just sent it to her by email.
I hope it can help. :D
And thanks for the fav Blue. :D
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